I am colorful, dynamic, constantly changing and inertia is propelling me toward my future and eternity. I am multi-faceted and as I move and change, the light that shines through Me, illuminates a different spectrum to whomever is observing. I am made of the finest materials because I am a child of God. I am His Daughter; therefore, a Princess. I am here for a short amount of time and I am a unique mixture of whatever your traits perceive me to be. I have a core but, I think the core of Being is too pure and rich to articulate and summarize. Trait theorist will continue to create adjectives and classifications until time ends for them. I know that I am today what I have chosen in this moment and like the turning of the kaleidoscope, will never again be this person again.
Superb content in my opinion. I found four small typo situations.
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2: rather than sucking up physic (did you mean psychic?)
3: other's view Me (should be others)
4: In the last sentences:
"will never again be this person again" (could delete the first "again" so it's not redundant.
These are my comments. I have enjoyed reading this paper. If there are any further questions by Jessica Phillips or the teacher/professor please feel free to call me. Jessica has my contact information. Thanks! Julie Goyette
no two crystals are alike, WOW
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